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All That Lies In Me
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All That Lies In Me |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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All that lies in me, All that dies in me, How can I live without you? You're the light on my darkest day, Cause of you my minds direction does sway, All that lies in me, All that dies in me, How can I live without you? Do you think of me? Forever happy we shall be. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, How can I live without you? Do you dream of me? I always dream about you so your face I see. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, How can I live without you? You are everything in my eyes, You give me one of those natural highs. All that lies in me, All that dies in me, How can I live without you? Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice to meet you... this poem/song has promise. Thanks for letting me see it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Kyle..such wonderful words of loving devotion. Lucky lady she is! *Hair cut huh?...new pic soon?*  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
thank ya guy and lady, yes a haircut lol probably no pic for a while cuz i look dorky  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
snowfromhell ... cool write , a good song this would make -wolf |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Fiery Flake of Snow, it is uncanny how much you look like my daughter's former boyfriend! Now that your facial hair is gone, if you post a new photo, the similarity would absolutely be AMAZING! ~ and yes, you are just as handsome as he is!  I agree with wolf, this would make a very good song!  EA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You shaved too? Be still this mothers heart...great write here kiddo |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You mean..all the hair is gone!!!???  |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
lol no! its all just very short Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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