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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-04-08 06:36 AM


Like real life
Pace slows to a
Natural magic force
Gripping dynasty
Marrying the others
Emotional power
Reconcile dominions
And then…
What wonderful epics
Confusing gap
Romance….ah yes, romance
Love by the current time
Wishes, rich intricate golden compass
Empty off into a new world
A subtle exploration
To bedrock
Wine press slides an offering
Formed from gleeful vineyards
Soft soaking broadcloth
Black-haired men do so well
From Allentown to Miami
Bard and sorceress
His spell
Unequivocally addressed
a nomad in my heart
There was that moment though
Here


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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2004-04-08 07:20 AM


Hey lady! This write is so rich with colour and moments passing by like flickering memories. I love the word 'Unequivocally'
I never knew it existed until now, and now i do (and know what it means), it made the stunning end to the poem even more so.

Bard and sorceress
His spell
Unequivocally addressed
a nomad in my heart
There was that moment though
Here

Always good to read you again Lee. xxx

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