Open Poetry #31 |
Hanging From A Moment |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Hanging From A Moment It's here beneath a complex stretch of duskiness overhead Beauty, in layers, form eternity as heavens bed It's viewed as our sky in magnitudes of deserving light And, so, I stare, so aware, at this deep dark night... Couldn't dismiss the message of prosperity I seemingly found There in awe of those crystals that never made it to ground Those stars claimed this sky as their purpose for me Oh, I embraced it's chill, in assurance, that I could see... It was a vision with the eyes yet ever touching the heart Just something the nighttime gave me while we breathe apart And, there in air, it was hanging from a moment in time Just like the stars, overwhelming, was something all mine... And, I saw you, I did, through misty-eyes With those stars, our connection, between you and I It's God's real reminder of finer decorations at hand But, all here hanging from a moment he had planned... Under this light I can see the path he has paved forever With good fortune, as our route, that we could walk it together Oh, no distance could take it's true measurability from within For, you're that sweetness where winter ends and spring begins... Simply blessed, I just sighed to that sky for this A sense of fulfillment that I had always missed And, with completion imbedding the real meaning it brings Then, know you are the song I am so willing to sing... Hanging from a moment the stars did their Godly like dance And, they showed me divine in a simple glance Hanging from a moment I touched grateful once again Oh, so graciously, whole heartedly, Amen... Sauni Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: Saunni, Saunni....you have been missed. I always appreciate the flow and natural graceful beauty of your writes. Big smiles to you, dear lady. Kacy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Saunni This is a beautiful write. I too love this verse... "Simply blessed, I just sighed to that sky for this A sense of fulfillment that I had always missed And, with completion imbedding the real meaning it brings Then, know you are the song I am so willing to sing..." Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have been wondering where you have been...your words have been sorely missed... good to read you again |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
With good fortune, as our route, that we could walk it together Oh, no distance could take it's true measurability from within For, you're that sweetness where winter ends and spring begins... Simply blessed, I just sighed to that sky for this A sense of fulfillment that I had always missed And, with completion imbedding the real meaning it brings Then, know you are the song I am so willing to sing... Saunni, how beautiful this is...and the words above are what I feel in my heart for my Honey-Love. Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Couldn't dismiss the message of prosperity I seemingly found There in awe of those crystals that never made it to ground Those stars claimed this sky as their purpose for me Oh, I embraced it's chill, in assurance, that I could see... (sigh) this was not only an assurance but also a praised testimony...lovely! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Saunni...Enjoyed all of it. I couldn't pick out one part that I liked better than the rest, cause it all blends together so well. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I adored the whole poem from the captivating title of "Hanging From A Moment" to the closing word of this prayerful write, "Amen". ~ and yes, indeed! ~ "Amen"! Good to read you again, Sweet Saunni! Warm hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Saunni, I have really missed reading you! This is most certainly a delightful write. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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