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Winter Misreading the Sky

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Greeneyes
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From my Journals of Endless Winter
~~~~


{I wish you could see these again}

~
Maybe he is lonely tonight
his images speak of
ordinary things captured
in fields of light

I might, for a moment, hear
the tapping of his finger upon my soul
            its a delicate task remembering --
maybe in something I read or touch
or how the moon sleeps with  rain

I am interested in the space between -
how different  blue looks  falling from your eyes

that one night winter will misread the sky

you know too

the gray    running along the scatter

It's true this is about love
the one thing you keep

yet, turn the key once

& you cant keep any of it

I try, but do not seem to find
a place among this language

I will leave all doors open
to recall the simple equations
of my memory
wondering what sphere held us
~
it begins to rain

I should have started with that


~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~
© Copyright 2004 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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Sigh. why does every poem remind me of him.


love.
JUju
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2 posted 04-08-2004 12:35 AM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf

I am interested in the space between -
how different  blue looks  falling from your eyes

tender one greeny , i realllllly liked this one , it reached way into my world lol
cool one babe

-wolfy
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a heartbeat heard within each sigh, each line that fell, in echo
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4 posted 04-08-2004 03:38 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

"I might, for a moment, hear
the tapping of his finger upon my soul
            its a delicate task remembering --
maybe in something I read or touch
or how the moon sleeps with  rain

I am interested in the space between -
how different  blue looks  falling from your eyes

that one night winter will misread the sky"

That's beautiful poetry from the soul. Nicely crafted.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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I don't know how you do it, but I am always amazed
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6 posted 04-08-2004 08:07 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

bravo dear lady.. again you capture in words what even hearts have a hard time explaining at times..
always in awe of your ability to do so..
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I am interested in the space between -
how different  blue looks  falling from your eyes

that one night winter will misread the sky

you know too

the gray    running along the scatter

~~~~
I try, but do not seem to find
a place among this language

I will leave all doors open
to recall the simple equations
of my memory
wondering what sphere held us
~
it begins to rain

I should have started with that

=================================

OH girlie...ya got me with this one..
but then you always do


you know too

the gray    running along the scatter


yesssssss... I know.....


I try, but do not seem to find
a place among this language



oh darlin...I disagree...

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

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I sit here in silence after reading your words..
just staring ar the monitor..
shaking my head..and wanting more
of your words to sweep me up, once more.
Please let me know when there is a book.
There should be you know?
You have amazing talent Lauren.
Excellent write pretty lady~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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9 posted 04-08-2004 09:31 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Hi Lauren,
Another beauty you have gifted us with.
I love it all, and this ending sums it up perfectly.......

I will leave all doors open
to recall the simple equations
of my memory
wondering what sphere held us
~
it begins to rain

I should have started with that


Hugs,
Ethel

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the gray    running along the scatter


There is always something in your words that touches, Lauren.

I hope you and yours have a wonderful Easter Holiday.


M
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We're free to pursue happiness but sorrow chases us.  -- moi

great ink here Greeneyes
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wow...every line is quoteable...the poem is powerful......it has been forever since I had thoughts as this...wish I had left the doors open as you did...your words are touching...
excellent penning
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Beautiful...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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wow awesomeeeeeeeee....i actually fell inlove with this poem keep it upp....love and hugzzzzzzzzzz
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Now, I understand the why and reason. Melancholy from and with much heart.
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thank you all.....luv to all warm hugsss

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

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