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Effigy
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disbelief

0 posted 2004-04-07 09:47 PM


I have it
wait

slipping away

Can’t lose it now,
there is not enough time

to unravel blood soaked dressings,
and bandages that bind together,
cauterizing the skin reveling the…

                     Broken Dragon


         It’s just a plastic imitation of Heaven.
                     There’s no predators here,
be at piece.
                     Just lay in the hand crafted shade,
                     or perhaps bask in the well positioned sun.
                     It’s all there just for you…
                                             really.

                     Here there’s no needs,
               and even fewer desires.




[This message has been edited by Effigy (04-07-2004 11:06 PM).]

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-04-07 11:44 PM


this is such a stunning write!....vivid images--good to read you again..

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-04-08 12:08 PM


Wow what imagery............

your cool........

I am going to keep an eye out for you here
heheh.

So happy.

Juju

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Michigan
3 posted 2004-04-08 12:31 PM


creative write ...wild style
-wolf

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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-08 03:50 AM


gawd! ...amazing write
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