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Under Red Umbrella

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JamesMichael
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Under Red Umbrella
(In A Rainstorm)


Her red umbrella was a welcome sight
for one so far from home, as she
called to him, an American tourist that
had just arrived from the City of Rome.
On rain soaked streets two souls meet, an
American and a playful French madmemoisille.
Under red umbrella we walked the streets,
where silky raindrops softly fell.
A rainy day kiss warmed up the level
of happinesss and tenderness.
As she pulled me close to heart,
I gave in to her sweet caress.
Passing all around us, colorful
buses and sleek citreon cars.
On this lovely day, the French
Riviera in a rainstorm was ours.


JamesLee
April05
2004

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1 posted 04-07-2004 09:18 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

sounds like a very sweetly romantic scene
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Smiles


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3 posted 04-08-2004 12:20 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

what a passion moment!
so soft the image!

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

ethome
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4 posted 04-08-2004 03:34 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Love it James

Great images in the rain...Cool man!

Eric
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you can write about anything if it has something to do with a woman...amazing...love it!
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Like the write James. Maybe I'll think on it and write about my umbrella of lavender. Cover with little shoes, purses, sun glasses
and many fun filled clips. When someone sees this umbrella they say, " That must be Bonnie's."
See Ya
Bon-Bon
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Bus stop, wet day, she's there I say
Please share my umbrella
Bus stop, bus go, she stays love grows
Under my umbrella
All that summer we enjoyed it
Wind and rain and shine
That umbrella we employed it
By August she was mine.... a young graham nash and the hollies
an oldie, but such a goodie
as ure words too

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Ahhh love this romantic moment James!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

JamesMichael
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Thank you all for the nice responses...James
 
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