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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-04-07 03:56 PM



Remember my unsightly shade of pale

how it may come and go

a silent reverse into skin

back to where...

you simply were not.


Remember this is no reflection of you...

this float without feet

you cannot put your foot down

and make me stop

for I am already grounded...

somewhere


Knowing I'm in mind

yours alone...

significant enough to scratch ink

across any blank page

fills me black

my most beautiful colour.

© Copyright 2004 gj - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-04-07 03:59 PM


"Knowing I'm in mind

yours alone...

significant enough to scratch ink

across any blank page

fills me black

my most beautiful colour."

WOW Gemma!!  This is fantastic.
Another keeper for my library.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-07 04:05 PM


Beautiful, Gemma!
muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-04-07 09:43 PM


oh, my, WOW
Aenimal
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4 posted 2004-04-07 11:15 PM


significant enough to scratch ink

across any blank page

fills me black

my most beautiful colour.


A perfect explanation of poetry's release Ms W. Kerr

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2004-04-08 05:47 PM


Wow, Gemma!

Thank you sharing such a wonderful piece of writing with us.  Happy Easter!

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-04-08 06:13 PM


Gem, my pet, your mind works in ingenious ways! I always read your poems at least twice ~ to digest and assimilate them!

Huggums,
Linda

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-04-08 06:46 PM


it's always a pleasure to read you Gem... I think I shall keep this

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2004-04-08 07:34 PM


my favorite color too...
wonderful write
*s
M

vandana
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9 posted 2004-04-08 08:47 PM


enjoyed
Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
10 posted 2004-04-08 10:48 PM


the power of the lexis
in any shade


you make the soul run away
to be by itself
and think...

Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
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Oakland, Or, USA
11 posted 2004-04-08 11:57 PM


Gem......

the lines in italics.....

how if may come and go
this float without feet
somewhere
fills me black

A poem within a poem........

love it

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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