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The Morning Light

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JL
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0 posted 04-07-2004 10:55 AM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JL


The Morning Light


A silent sun-set begins its journey into the night.
Peeking little bolts of orange, and golden rays of light…

Sheltering peering eyes focused with enchantment
as papaya trees sway, beneath Mauna Loa’s rouge light…


The sea sings its rhythmic melody, against white sands and rocky shore
While dolphins play as spirited children, near the ocean’s floor…

Our thoughts touch and glimmer, at the lighting of a flickering torch
Our shared feelings are warmed and chilled, across a grassy porch…


In the palms of my hand I rest your delicate features,
While pressing our lips together, to become that evening’s creature…

The scent of ginger and exotic tropical is whispering at the night air
As a cool breeze swims in off the ocean, echoing through your hair…    


Gently we press into the night, into dreams of cotton candy,
Where dreams are real and life is not, where reality is a flute of brandy

Until the day is new and waking is too, and a melody is true,
cooing a breath of the morning light, me and you
In the morning light…
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Margherita
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1 posted 04-07-2004 10:59 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

JL, absolutely beautiful scenery you display here!
Love, Margherita
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2 posted 04-07-2004 11:00 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Shhh....a tender moment...
Just lovely!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 04-07-2004 11:04 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

You could knock me over with a feather right about now! I could scarcely breathe with the overwhelming beauty and sensuousness of this gracious and touching piece of writing!

This was beyond lovely!


EA
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4 posted 04-07-2004 11:05 AM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

JL,

This is beautiful!  

Take Care,
~Laura~
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5 posted 04-07-2004 12:40 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful imagery here
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 04-07-2004 12:43 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Such subtle play of the words, caressing the feeling of the ocean breeze.
Wonderful write. TD
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7 posted 04-07-2004 01:29 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very tender...very lovely...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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8 posted 04-07-2004 09:47 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

a very aromatic delicious scene..very nice
LeeJ
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you are a morning light, which shines the whole day through...lovely thoughts and verse, romantic all the way through...smiles and hugs for your happiness....luv Lee J.
Suetang
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10 posted 04-29-2004 01:47 AM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Your words awaken all the senses.  Beautiful writing yet again.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
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11 posted 06-28-2004 02:25 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

JL -- this was beautiful; I really could imagine the scene, you painted it so well.   ......jo
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