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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-04-07 09:50 AM


Yesterday's sound fill skies
in midnight of blue,
stars dance
the shimmering moon.
I trace     memories silhouette
on silvery waters.
Ripples grow
until reflections    {of past}
can no longer be seen.

Stillness of night
hears my heart call
        {to winds of change}
Embracing warmth
of evenings breeze,
still touching memories   of you.




It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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1 posted 2004-04-07 09:59 AM



You are Writing!
Do you know how good it is to see
a new poem from you?

Of course you do!

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-04-07 10:04 AM


Yes! What Karilea said !
Hugs dear poetess!! Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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3 posted 2004-04-07 11:08 AM


"Ripples grow
until reflections    {of past}
can no longer be seen."

~ Oh, yes! It is a blessing when unpleasant things from the past can no longer be seen!


Linda


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4 posted 2004-04-07 11:27 AM


GentlestSpirit~
This is sooooo softly beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Gaia
5 posted 2004-04-07 11:31 AM


ohhh, this one touches the heart and soul

good to see your name here today

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-04-07 11:35 AM


Donna~

This is touching...

and so surreal for me today..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

gemjop
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7 posted 2004-04-07 12:29 PM


I trace     memories silhouette
on silvery waters.

Beautiful!

love gem. xx

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-04-07 12:30 PM


yes touching....
Enchantress
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9 posted 2004-04-07 01:34 PM


Oh Donna I have missed reading you!
So good to see you here and this is wonderful!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2004-04-09 08:40 AM


I am sitting here wishing I had more time to be here.  You are all so very wonderful, thank you for your support, it means so very much to me.  HUGS and peace.
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11 posted 2004-04-12 03:17 AM


Your poem was beautiful and breath-taking...nicely described and easily pictured. Good work!

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

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