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Spring Breeze [Waka]
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Spring Breeze [Waka] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Is that the spring breeze or the nightingale's soft song? Beneath the full moon- the purple iris trembles; ripples spread across the pond. ~P |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enchanting image ... a dreamlike place to feel ONE. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! What a great write! Left me thinking, seeing snippets of panoramic view. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a beautiful scene. Thank you for showing it to me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Very nice! I admit Waka is not a form I have heard of. Please shoot me an email and tell me about it. INclan |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is really lovely. I must learn how to write form of poetry. Awesome. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
softly astounding |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, now you know i will be trying to find out what a "waka" is.... Paul, you are just so darned pretty hope you are enjoying your vacation  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ripples on the pond the full moon blinking the birds fade with the sunset silent again until morning |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
choshi -- this was lovely! I want to know what makes a Waka, as well, please email if you would!  ......jo |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Enchanting image ... a dreamlike place to feel ONE. Love, Margherita Yes, feeling Oneness....Thank you... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
BRAVO! What a great write! Left me thinking, seeing snippets of panoramic view. Aww, Thank you....I'm glad....  ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This is a beautiful scene. Thank you for showing it to me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) Thank you Nan, and I appreciate your taking the time to peek... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This is really lovely. I must learn how to write form of poetry. Awesome. Chris Thank you Chris. Your comment is deeply appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed.... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
softly astounding Aww thank you Dixie.... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
oh, now you know i will be trying to find out what a "waka" is.... Paul, you are just so darned pretty Aww thank you Dawn, I am so touched by your comments and your interest.. ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
choshi -- this was lovely! I want to know what makes a Waka, as well, please email if you would! ......jo Dear Jo, Thank you so much for your kind response and for yoru interest... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
ripples on the pond the full moon blinking the birds fade with the sunset silent again until morning Ahh yes! Hovering, above the clouds the white moon- sheds its silent light on the wind-rippled Charles.... ~P |
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