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Goodknight
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0 posted 2004-04-06 08:43 PM


Not sure these days where my meaning comes
Not sure yesterday either as I ponder
Just where does me get defined and sold
I really wonder just being so bold
What is it that makes me tick
Some may think I am a stick
But just why do I continue
Grandpa doings do make me tingle
Working days don’t define much of me
Writing is a special find
It exercises my being and mind
But what is me my being asks
Am I a dad a spouse a child
Yes to all those over many miles
But they are important
In making me as me
But what is the glue
That surrounds me
Is it knowable
Or do I flee


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Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-04-06 08:53 PM


Goodknight,
   It is so good to read your thoughts again.  I'm always asking myself the same, what makes me me?  Changing the subject, from one of your responses that you wrote to me I learned that we are practically neighbors.  I probably rode my ten speed on the road you drive to work! Small world isn't it!  I had identified with your work before, but now even better!   Take care,
                 Sadie

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2 posted 2004-04-06 08:54 PM


smiling...

I was just discussing the identity crisis with a friend too.

You summed it up nicely, Paul (albeit from a perspective different than mine)

but maybe that's the point.



Much enjoyed.

Martie
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3 posted 2004-04-06 09:07 PM


Paul

Without the questioning spirit we couldn't move forward ....you have that in abundance and it's a good thing. If you are a stick, you are a good strong one.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-04-06 09:27 PM


Well Paul you raise questions for me to ponder again tonight.
And I must say, if you're a stick...
you sure aren't a 'stick in the mud!'
Excellent thoughts in this write...well done.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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5 posted 2004-04-07 03:31 AM


I often wonder the same
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