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Dont tell anyone - another Hawk

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DavePage
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0 posted 04-06-2004 04:38 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for DavePage

Have you thought about a diet?
Your gut needs some exercise!

Get out my gut and I will weigh a lot less
I am only an image
Why

You wont allow me
and work to support you
you say words into my mind
No-one can hear!

Why me?!

Music and the trees tell me
to take that step
but why me

You tell me they don't matter
not to consider them

Without them I have no vision
Without you I dont live
Without them I dont exist

Why

You have the world to choose
Why should I ever feature on your horizon

You dont know
You dont understand
What are you but a fool
Who wouldn't know a meal
If he didn't faint

Why would I choose you

You care

You allowed me to rest

Dave
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Margherita
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1 posted 04-06-2004 04:44 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very captivating!

You have the world to choose
Why should I ever feature on your horizon


Why? Because you glow on that horizon, evidently!
Love, Margherita
Grover
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2 posted 04-06-2004 06:55 PM       View Profile for Grover   Email Grover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Grover's Home Page   View IP for Grover

That's the word I'd use as well-- captivating. As usual, good write Dave.
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3 posted 04-06-2004 11:19 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Interesting interior dialogue, you made me think.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

DavePage
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4 posted 04-23-2004 06:20 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

I suppose I was trying to highlight the dialogue of two people who have made contact and now start arguing about the sofa, the kitchen, friends and who controls

Thanks all

dave
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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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