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Across My Heart (tanka)
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Across My Heart (tanka) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . Blessed with velvet touch Rapture wakens my senses Vanishing too soon~ You tiptoed across my heart Like a ripple through my dreams . . Chris Barker April 6, 2004 ~~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chris~ This is just delightfully lovely~ Such softly feathered thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Chris... painted with such a soft touch. Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed. ~Before befriending butterflies |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful.....heart tiptoing is nice....most of my memories must have heavy feet.....*smile* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy oyour read  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou lady poets four! Hugs! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Let me throw a male persepctive in here as well. VERY well done. I like the Japanese forms and look forward to reading more from you. INclan |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always so beautiful in any expression you choose. Lovely Chris. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
INclan & TD, thankyou both so much. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh ...this is gorgeous. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Margherita, you always make me smile with your comments, thankyou. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
such a beautiful peace to this....a floating feather upon amber winds.... ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww, thankyou Lauren. hugs! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous write Chris |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful , soft tender feelings Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Many thanks Dixie & Hope! Hugs. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have felt that tiptoe.."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Susan for enjoying my write. Hugs! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
OOOh! Chris, good to read you and see you. love your pic, its good to put a pretty face to a name. I love that delicate tip toeing. keeping this. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
gemjop - thankyou so much for the compliments. I am truly flattered. hugs! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
softly alluring....loved this |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
lovely, Nightshade. Encore. Sadie |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou muted and Sadie for reading and commenting. Hugs! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
hey hows it goin? that was short and pleasant, nice job Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It's not goin' too bad Snowflake....lol. Thanks & Hugs !! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chris, this was really lovely! Enjoyed the picture with it. ......jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much jo. Happy Easter !! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Blessed with velvet touch Rapture wakens my senses Vanishing too soon~ You tiptoed across my heart Like a ripple through my dreams Oh yes! subtle and strong.....~P |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much choshi! Happy Easter! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Chris...Sad and touching words. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Happy Easter Paul & thankyou! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Absolutely lovely, Chris. Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am so glad that you liked it Patricia. Happy Easter & thankyou. |
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