Open Poetry #31 |
Wuz and Did Do's - for Earth Angel |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a list of wuzzes that I was supposed to do And on the other side is a list of Dids that I have done. Sometimes the wuzzes outdo the dids And to this plea now I have come. Lord help me with my wuzzes, for they are a whole list long: I was to help my grandma, I was to sing a song, I was to kiss my husband, I was to hug my kid, Only two things on this list are the ones I did. Lord help me with my wuzzes, they are growing great I was to pray to You before; I was to fix a gate; I was to see a friend, and learn just how to relate; I was to go on a camping trip with my long-time mate. I was to write a letter; I was to pull the weeds; I was to write a poem, and see to my own needs; I was to get a mammogram, oh Lord please hear my plea How can I get these to my list of dids before I fall down to my knees? I was to do the dishes, I was to wash the dog; I was to get the car lubed, and to remove the kitchen clog; I was to bake a cake, and get the cookies done; I was to do these things before the setting sun. I was to remember my childhood so my children I would raise just right but all I did was turn around and my children were adults ~ simply overnight. I was to set a course for me A course so straight and true And all I have before me now, is a list of undone wuzzes, as I stand before You. For all of the things I’ve done did, and with all these wuzzes left to do Lord smile upon me, this woman here, For I’m sure my list is shorter, than the list You did for You. ~*~ A repost, for Earth Angel... and anyone else who has been through days like these... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh boy do I know this feeling Karilea! And, now that you have my head spinning... I'm off to check on my list of 'to do' for 'today'. Very cute write...love it!! Hugs YOU! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Why, thank you, Dear Glorious Orb of Solar Energy! This was a delightful poem ~ and a wake up call! I better get crackin' on my To Do List so that they do not become "undone wuzzes"! lol To do, or not to do? That is the question! ~ and thanks for the answer! ~ DO IT!!! Have a productive day! I know that I now will! Linda |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this, Karilea...it reminds me of someone...something..hmmmm, oh! Me! |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
What a delightful little poem I really enjoyed the gentle comdey which took the poem to a positive end!! ^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ I read Earth Angels... and then I became inspired to read this.. Both are amazingly brilliant.. but they remind me of things to do my head hurts ^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^ Oh well, guess we can't all be perfect!! ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Excellent could not do it better myself. |
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