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zenny
Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-04-06 08:52 AM


Friends tell me
I will come through
Once my thoughts will be free
of you

You showed me
what love's all about
The excitement
of the very first kiss
just to realise the next one
will only be better

The love I saw
within your eyes
and felt when
us two
became one

You loved me then
so what happened now?
Did some evil kind of force
stole all your love and caring?
Or was is just reality
catching up with us
proving
that a first love
is always followed
by some more?

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-04-06 09:11 AM


Oh, yes, that first love is sooo exciting! But if it were not to last, remember that "it is always followed by some more"!!! ~ and each subsequent love is a fresh and exciting new start!


EA

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-06 02:37 PM


Love produces hope for more love.
DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-04-06 05:45 PM


Can I

Dave
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so evil kind of force
stole your love and caring?

just reality
catching us

proving

that a first love
is always followed

by some more?

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