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Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2004-04-06 08:30 AM



^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^

We silently sail through sunshine
in search of tranquility lost.
Desparately seeking the echo of sound
to slowly trail to a whisper.
Descending into a peaceful pitfall.
We go together.

^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^


"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

© Copyright 2004 Kimberley Mason - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2004-04-06 08:32 AM


I like that, "a peaceful pitfall" very interesting as is the rest of this little poem....enjoyed.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-04-06 08:36 AM


Ah, yes! The "search for tranquility lost"!

You have some very interesting expressions in this unique little poem!


EA

Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!
3 posted 2004-04-06 09:13 AM


^*~Thankyou both~*^

I appreciate all of the responses!!



^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-04-06 02:38 PM


We go together... a delightful thought.
DavePage
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5 posted 2004-04-06 06:12 PM


Love it Kicking

Dave

Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!
6 posted 2004-04-10 05:44 AM


^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^*~*^

Glad you all enjoyed!


^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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7 posted 2004-04-11 01:22 AM


Kim -- I really liked your unique style with this one!     ......jo
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-04-11 04:46 AM


this is very quiet and calm

softly done just right

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