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Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 2004-04-05 10:10 PM



I carried you within me
Just underneath my heart
Loving you from conception
A love story from the start

Each time my heart beat
My love for you grew strong
All the things I dreamed of
Were the words to our love song

Now when I look at you in wonder
Trying to capture back the years
My heart still beats our love song
As I look at you through tears

No mother could ever realize
How deep her love would be
With every beat of my heart
You’ll always be a part of me



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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-04-05 10:56 PM


Awww, this is lovely Deb.   hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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2 posted 2004-04-05 11:11 PM


Beautiful, Deb...straight from
a Mother's heart. Love it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-04-06 02:20 AM


wonderful write!
Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-06 07:01 PM


Well worth the read. Excellent!
Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean
5 posted 2004-04-06 08:42 PM


Thanks guys. I'm going through the "missing teen blues" as she gets closer to 16!
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