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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-04-05 05:29 PM


I will freely admit I chickened out on this

It is like the Mountain's singing to me of a need for care, and was consigned for my lack of guts in not publishing the real words

It became the Stone, and the Stone will always stand on it's hill and remind me!

Dave

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Ignorance

Rippling chimes of wind
Whistle oblivion to persona
Preserving ego and façade
Of moments of pleasure
That courage regrets
Enjoying
Crescendo

The activity of magic
Seeking exaltation
And fear
Doomed to wander the world with the power
Of ignorance and to propagate it

To inanimately pulse life
To goals
Reminded by the future
Foretold by the past
Described by the present

Dave

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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1 posted 2004-04-05 06:03 PM


Hey, this is great Dave!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-04-06 06:42 AM


To inanimately pulse life
To goals
Reminded by the future
Foretold by the past
Described by the present

Awesome David, simply awesome!

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
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3 posted 2004-04-06 06:48 AM


"Reminded by the future
Foretold by the past
Described by the present"

I simply loved this section.
It is oh so true,
the future reminds us that
we're still here...
we still have dreams...
and that they may come true!


^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-04-23 06:29 PM


Thanks

Dave

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5 posted 2007-11-11 12:50 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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