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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-04-05 01:04 PM

Insatiable Love for You

I can see that rich sweetness in your eyes so true,
I can smell your delicate scent in my mind’s memory too…

Being without you makes for a sad and lonely tune,
I sing and hum it daily, when I reminisce about you…

I hear your soft voice chiming, and your captive silly laugh,
reminding me of how warm you were, just on my behalf.

Why was I so blind, and so miserable not to see,
just how sweet and loving, you really were to me?

I can only guess for now, if your eyes are still as bright,
and hope for you, someone special, to enjoy that glowing light.

I would end this rhyme right now, if there were not this want in me,
this insatiable love for you, will never set me free...

I am captive by my thoughts of you, and surely always will,
until I die, then beyond, I await that moments thrill.

To see you again, to love you again, are my prayers and hope to be,
and to someday hear you say, you are still in love with me.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2004-04-05 01:08 PM

Ah dont i know this feeling...nicely done

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-04-05 01:11 PM

JL,

Don't believe I have seen you before...welcome (and if I did, just ignore my dementia).

Very heartfelt writing.

Susan

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-04-05 01:51 PM

beautifully and thoughtfully written JL

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-04-05 01:55 PM

Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-06 04:08 AM

romantic!

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2004-04-06 09:12 AM

very beautiful...
it's a little strange though...I have
an ex gf from Tex who I think about from
time to time...and I often wonder about her
too. Though I'm happy with my life and all
some people never leave our hearts. Well
done, this touches the heart!

Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-04-06 09:39 AM

May your insatiable love for him be sated some day... I really felt the yearning in this touching poem of love.

Warm, welcoming hugs,
EA

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-04-29 01:23 AM

Your words of love flow so beautifully and are so much enjoyed by this reader.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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