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Variants of Eleanor
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Variants of Eleanor |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Dawn draws sparkling diamonds of night Statements of imagination wearing might Tangible fine points, like Monet's "Rouen Cathedral" Light transforms density & swears perceptible details Crystalline marble, arresting the eyes in each part of day Most fluid of scenes, where imagination is a ballet Sovereign over physical reality in different atmospheres Establishing ambiance of each, coloring one another’s premiere Mixing session, fragments in all its virtue careers Stimulates illuminating connections & seers Impalpable yet recognizable, aesthetic visuals Illustration of the crucial arms of nature Philosopher tuning songs into enlightening vapors Mood of day, hours bearing vigorous harmony Transporting heights of lights…magnificently Primed faith, kinetic poems, reveals a captivating muse Dialogue unfolding a choreographed soundless music. Evolving states of mind, invisible power cannot be seen Mirrors continual images haply convened Poignant collage, virtuoso groupings, voices of provisions Nimbleness of thoughts, sculpturing woozy visions Morphing within their changing milieu Incantations of elaborate pictorial curves Double meanings, communicative earthly archs Domain of prowess, mysteriously swelter Within the "Variants of Eleanor" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A very stunning write, as all of your verses are. Poetic grace! Beautiful Lee J. JL  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ *sighs* at the beauty of your thoughts~ 'Crystalline marble, arresting the eyes in each part of day Most fluid of scenes, where imagination is a ballet' You are SO ORIGINAL always ... soft beauteous word-flows cascade the page~ Such a pleasure Such delight~ Do what you do Cause you do it just right~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee You have written this on a phone bill I can pay for I love your words dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Dawn draws sparkling diamonds of night Statements of imagination wearing might Tangible fine points, like Monet's "Rouen Cathedral" Light transforms density & swears perceptible details The whole poem was outstanding, but the line about light grabbed at the love of science and art in me. Ditto what Grover said. |
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