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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-04-05 11:04 AM


Universal, is this theme of life, effaced by none
Never to be common placed, moving men bygone
For their savored autumn notes, ring out brand new
By a great magician’s hand, if the source be true
All hopes, fears, and love, achieve beyond uncertainty
Reflecting themes in human life, a skillful morning breeze
We turn a key and open wide, our soul-filled loving arms
Windward thoughts deep within, blooms prophetic hearts
Formed eccentric, stillness lives, pure of any sound
By banners flown of dawn’s sweet flutes, infinity profound
The ultimate communiqué, sea’s celestial breathe
Excels the crowns of motivation
….where home forever sets.


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1 posted 2004-04-05 11:35 AM


"Formed eccentric, stillness lives, pure of any sound
By banners flown of dawn’s sweet flutes, infinity profound"

awesome lines there

enjoyed

JL
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2 posted 2004-04-05 11:41 AM


Beautiful, Lee J.
JL

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3 posted 2004-04-05 12:07 PM


"By banners flown of dawn’s sweet flutes, infinity profound
The ultimate communiqué, sea’s celestial breathe
Excels the crowns of motivation
….where home forever sets."

Beautiful...you  once again leave me speechless.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

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