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Halloween

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Trent
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0 posted 04-05-2004 08:08 AM       View Profile for Trent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trent


I like halloween because it's scary
The food looks yucky and scary but its actually nice
I like the carved pumpkins
I eat their guts on rice.
We dress like vampires and devils
we are going to use black balloons and paint
i like the spiders on their web
they will make my mommy faint!
© Copyright 2004 Trent van Krieken - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-05-2004 08:11 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

Just a little note let everyone know that Trent is my son (almost 8 years old) and this is the very first poem he has ever written! and he is very excited! it only took a tiny smidge of guidance from me


VERY good job Trent!
Sunshine
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Welcome to Passions, Trent!  I will be looking for more of your poetry, very soon!
Enchantress
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WELCOME TO PASSIONS TRENT!
Your first post here is really good.
I know you will enjoy it here and have fun!

Please check your e-mail for a special Passions welcome.

~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~
Susan Caldwell
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Hey Trent!  Very good job with your first poem.  

I love halloween also!  

Susan
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5 posted 04-05-2004 10:31 AM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Welcome to Passions Trent !!
I really enjoyed your first post !
Have fun here !  Chris
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6 posted 04-05-2004 10:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

OhTrent~
WELCOME TO THE CIRCLE~

What a FUN write~

I vote with your mommy on those spiders ...
they scare me too~

*Huglets* to you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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BluesSerenade
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7 posted 04-05-2004 08:27 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Pass the candy and hold the guts!   

Welcome Trent, this was lots of fun to read.

MovesInSilence
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mmmm candied guts ... *drools* hehehe
loved the poem Trent
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9 posted 04-06-2004 02:48 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

YEAH! Great first poem!

I'm so happy that you have come to be with us here, Trent! Keep writing!
Kicking Kim
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10 posted 04-06-2004 05:54 AM       View Profile for Kicking Kim   Email Kicking Kim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kicking Kim's Home Page   View IP for Kicking Kim

^*-Trent-*^
Welcome to Passions honey.
I'm sure that you will like it here.

Excellent first post..
watch out for the spiders!



^*-Kimberley-*^


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11 posted 04-06-2004 10:51 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

awww sweet talent indeed runs in the family....welcome!!

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The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
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Pumpkin guts? LOL, that is hilarious. Nice to meet you, Trent! Make sure you repost this one again in October, it's a great pumpkin poem.
Grover
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A great first go, Trent... wonderful sense of humor! Welcome to PIP!
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Welcome Trent--I very much enjoyed this...

Trent
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Thank you everyone for writing about my poem

Trent
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Hi Trent....this place goes fast...so I'm booting this back to the top so others can meet you

I'll be looking for another poem from you, okay?
Martie
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Hi Trent...I'm so glad you posted your first poem here.  Welcome!!!
steavenr
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Trent, you rock, Dude!  Welcome to a life-long habit you will never want to break!  Great poem!!
Saunni
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This is really good! Great write here! Welcome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Dark Angel
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Hi Trent, this is such a cool poem about Halloween...I see talent runs in the family. Keep writing young man I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Maree

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

velociraptor
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21 posted 05-08-2004 05:47 AM       View Profile for velociraptor   Email velociraptor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for velociraptor

Hi Trent, I really enjoyed your poem about halloween. The part about your mummy fainting made me laugh

Daniel
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