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Fluid dialect
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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Accountability has need to give voice to any and all wrongdoings of mine but the immensity of the task has far outweighed my vocabulary. Repentance reaches to Redeemer but with the piles of soil my voice is swept under the rug and sorrow steps heavily on my tongue. When my words are not able my eyes know just what to say, by Grace the Lord understands my fluid dialect and sin by sin they are wept away. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (04-06-2004 01:59 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're tugging on me, dear, and I would lift the weight if I could... I would indeed... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I have one word...Grace...am blessed with foregiveness by Grace and by Grace am given good friends.... hugs |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetJellyGirl~ This is a gentle reminder to us ALL ... that He is always there with forgiveness~ ALWAYS~ Loving you ... holding you in prayerful thought~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
lovely sweetheart Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
By far the best poem I've ever read... seriously! A keeper! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
outstanding write. I liked your play on the word fluent/fluid. Good message. I enjoyed the depth and quality of this immensely. Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...you are |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"sorrow steps heavily on my tongue" Beautiful write..I really loves this line. You write with great passion.. looking forward to reading more!  ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all...*smile*...just wanted to find a way to say that sometimes tears, are a good thing |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When my words are not able my eyes know just what to say, by Grace the Lord understands my fluid dialect and sin by sin they are wept away. What an outstanding portrait of faith and forgiveness... Excellent work! *S* |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
incredible write!  let the tears flow....we'll be here with a tissue |
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