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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-04-04 11:27 PM



Why is it that you consume
my thoughts?

Enslaved to your memory
am I not?

What madness dwells inside
these veins?

Am I not hypnotised
by your presence?

One word spoken, connected,
I am mesmerized,

My soul seeks that which
is lost,

My heart hungers for
the passion of your soul,
the taste of your thoughts,

Awaiting this destiny,
no longer shall we play
foolish games,

For the eyes of your heart,
the lips of your soul,
whispers to me ,
all of your secrets,

Why must we pretend?
through flesh and times before,
have I not known you?

Then You seek me, I seek you,
One breath cannot be breathed,
until your words break the silence,

Standing, your words breathe,
in gentle flowing whispers,
bathing my neck,

My eys are closed,
once more, have I not been
bitten by loves' bite?

Without even a touch of a finger,
you bring forth pleasure,
heat of your body, the smell of your presence,
hearing your words spoken,

Not one touch is needed,
for when you speak my name,
my heart has been touched a thousand times,

My mind is filled with lonely days,
memories play havoc with my mind,
death would be more bareable,

For you read my heart,
like an open book,
one you love to smell,

Peeling away the pages,
devoring every word,
lingering, holding it upon your tongue,
savoring the sweet flavor,
eating your heart becomes filled,

My precious darling touch my lips,
speak the unspeakable,
believe the unbelievable,
for all is not lost,

Between earth and heaven,
there is a sky,
all in between shall be found,

Slow is the death of me,
if I cannot touch your heart,
or speak the unspoken thoughts,

Thoughts that flow as streams
to a river, continious,
be not dead, but alive,

Awaken in me, become my immortal,
my beloved,
once more let our love be reborn,

Bring me to life once again....


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-04-05 04:48 AM


Such a wondrous flow of deep longing.
You are very much alive just through this longing.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-05 04:53 AM


very passionate! astounding!
Goldenrose
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3 posted 2004-04-05 05:36 AM


This is an extremely passionate write..exposing your heart for all to see....your expression of love is just beautiful....your heart is a very precious area....thank you....
Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-04-05 05:38 AM


Margherita~your compliments are very beautiful to me..thanks for always reading and repling to my poetry...

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2004-04-05 05:40 AM


Sweet Dixie woman....I could never thank you enough! Your words mean alot to me...

~ARH
love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Kicking Kim
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6 posted 2004-04-05 05:41 AM


What a powerful poem.
You speak directly from the heart
and this was so full of emotion!

I really enjoyed this write,
each little stanza
was like a miniature
homage to love!


^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-04-05 05:44 AM


This is very beautiful.I
enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2004-04-05 05:44 AM


Gold~your words are very...very precious to me...and you know my heart all to well, by the way...I think I see a piece of paper stuck in between your teeth...LOL...the rental is due on that book..LOL!

Love and hugs
~ARH

Forever VQ

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2004-04-05 05:47 AM


Kim~ thank You! love is my theme..LOL

But seriously I appreciate your kind and loving comments!

~ARh
Love and Hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2004-04-05 05:50 AM


Ehtel~ glad to see you Mrs. Romance !

Glad you thought it to be beautiful....

Your poetry is always beautiful!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
11 posted 2004-04-05 10:54 AM


RomanticHeart~

'For you read my heart,
like an open book'


Ahh, this is beautifully true~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
12 posted 2004-04-05 07:35 PM


Silky...loved reading this...James
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