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DuckieGurL
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since 2004-04-01
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0 posted 2004-04-04 09:58 PM



Rainy Days always Remind Me of You

The heavenly shower from the above

tapping my shoulders with its finger tips

Made me realized what a person I could be

when standing in the rain

alone, without you.

Everything is in silent state.

Does the world exist?

Or I'm the one that's been left out by it?

Feeling of Losing Grip

A second chance to grab my destiny back


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-04 09:59 PM


sounds hopeless...but the sun will shine tomorrow
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-05 03:07 PM



froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2004-04-06 12:09 PM


I agree with passing shadows.
This is a very good poem.

:-)

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-04-06 12:26 PM


Mucho-Nice!  Very nice poem!
JL

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