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Grateful Shadows
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Grateful Shadows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Grateful Shadows  Do come, thus to link light to dark From trance arises this forgotten spark Of what once was, in romantic dream Of all that binds in woven seams Pluck up thy quill and tend once more To all blue shadows beyond yon door Through the mirrors, beyond the mist As sealed throughout with most ardent kiss Write then of times that seamed our souls When love was real and made one whole Wherein trees would hold the all of us In memory now we are but a trust Hold in the grail all that will live Hold in the shadows the gifts that give Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Karilea, So elegant and proudly written. Enjoyed. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bless you, Kathleen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Karilea. Hugs and thank you. ~Before befriending butterflies |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
simply.. yes  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know this caught my eye, especially a beautiful piece of art here, Mama K |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
All held in the shadows of my heart. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
definitely touches the romantic heart with a sweet and gentle caress Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea These words feel like old lace, fragile, yet forever.  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karilea...elegantly written, so soft and tender. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..mesmerizing poem--wonderful ..spiros ---------- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my how lovely. hugs for this. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, How can you consistently capture me in your words, transporting me to different times, and sinking me within them? You have tremendous grace in writing. Enjoyed. Sadie |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Karilea.... like a bright ray of Sunshine!!  Hugs, Ethel |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"through the mirrors, beyond the mist" This line blew me away. It has so many meanings and made me think for a while which is an accomplishment by anyones standards! ...I like to think that it means, look beyond first impression. Look really hard and you'll see the truth.  Excellent write ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whence was thy time of maiden's prance before the ball of elegant dance. As windward waves wash o'er the sand and two might walk of hand in hand. Wherein the heart does lie the love beyond the mist, the flight of dove. Beyond the sky and starlit sight upon a steed, one cherished knight. |
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