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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-04-03 07:02 PM




"Umarmung auf violett" (Embrace on violet) by Peter Wever


We touch


Intoxicated by
the sweet fragrance
of Spring blossoms
adorning the tree
a little bird
just captured
your message of love.

His tiny breast
overflows with sweetness.
His voice mingles
with the soft breeze
and together they play
the most charming tune
reaching out to touch
my longing heart.

The petals tremble in delight
inviting me to join their dance.
And my arms open wide
in trusting anticipation.
I close my eyes
and let the music
carry me to the place
where lovers meet.

By the voice of love
we are lifted up
from the hard grounds
into magical clouds
of enchantment
spread in the skies of blue
just for me and you.

Our laughter echoes
throughout all the planes
until the whole Universe
vibrates in unison.
We touch and merge
wrapped in angel’s wings.
A sigh of recognition
dances upon the ripples
of our total immersion
into the essence of love.

Our souls capture
the passionate call
performed by love divine
conveyed in a little bird’s song.
We touch and melt
accepting the invitation
by the messenger of Spring,
blissfully we surrender
to the power of God’s dream.

Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-03 07:33 PM


The petals tremble in delight
inviting me to join their dance''''

~~


what a beautiful dance and scene....a true delight to experience....

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-04-03 07:38 PM


Very Beautiful Margherita.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-04-03 08:21 PM


Simply breathtaking Margherita. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-04-03 08:25 PM


Margherita,
Beautiful picture, lovely write.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-04-03 08:26 PM


A magical experience!  
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-04-03 09:43 PM


yes of course the bird is the catalyst
making it happen, in sweetness of voice
the lure of all creatures to the power of love

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2004-04-03 11:22 PM


Each primal heart knows the spring...a friend that comes with flowers and good wine.
TD

HopeS
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8 posted 2004-04-04 12:39 PM


Flowers in bloom and birds attune
This was so beautiful
Hope

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9 posted 2004-04-04 12:42 PM


youve painted a marvelous feeling, your words have captured so much
passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-04-04 03:55 AM


in awe
ethome
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11 posted 2004-04-04 07:38 AM


Simply an exquisite write!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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12 posted 2004-04-04 09:43 AM


Margherita~
This is as lovely as it gets !!!!

*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Spiros Zafiris
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13 posted 2004-04-04 10:31 AM


..very gentle--very lyric--much enjoyed..


..spiros

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DavePage
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14 posted 2004-04-04 01:16 PM


Excellent

I lived in that garden with you, sat in the tree and sang

Dave

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15 posted 2004-04-05 06:15 AM


Excellant! just perfection! I loved the poem and the painting perfect for eachother....

This one is simply your best!

keeper!!!!!

~ARH
Love and Hugs



Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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16 posted 2004-04-05 09:23 AM


Absolutely breathtaking.
Your words dance down the page...
So very much enjoy your work.
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Margherita
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17 posted 2004-04-05 10:06 AM


Thank you all my poet friends. You spoil me with such loving generous comments.
Happy Spring and Love Time to all!
Love, Margherita

vandana
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18 posted 2004-04-11 08:38 PM


nice
Sadelite
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19 posted 2004-04-11 11:55 PM


Margherita,
  I enjoyed your beautiful poem.  It holds so much enthusiasm for life.
              Sadie

Margherita
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20 posted 2004-04-12 09:54 AM


Thank you dear vandana and Sadie. In touching in love we always gain so much.
Love and hugs. Margherita

JamesMichael
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21 posted 2004-04-12 07:48 PM


Lovely...James
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22 posted 2004-04-12 09:22 PM


Well, if this poetic delight didn't tickle me feathers, nothing will! Enchantingly delightful!

Love & Light,
Linda

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