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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-04-03 12:07 PM


It hasn't taken me very long to realise I still need the quality of the words written here.

Dave
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Crescents of a gentle yellowing image make their place across sounds of a world fractionally at peace
Gently moving an array blinding essence to force the clean-up of today's thoughts, last night's passion, and dismissal of fragments of bliss

Warming a feeling of some earth sacrifice within a feeling

A bright sun appears
Maybe a bright son appears to speak to you in years to come to ask of that fragrence enveloped by music and the percussion of restless breaths and pants of ideas

And Family
echo streams
of living and dying fire
burning hot
in a cauldron

As you watch a Son
Blazing arise

Dave



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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2004-04-03 12:12 PM


told u so...

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-04-03 12:20 PM


Yes you did Ink

But you are such a Lady

Dave

VAS
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Oregon
3 posted 2004-04-03 12:34 PM


Fascinating write! With Easter on the horizon, this has added poignancy.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-03 01:14 PM


Another great one, Dave.
Margherita
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5 posted 2004-04-03 05:45 PM


The sun and the Son are both a source of LIGHT and your words give me a feeling of warmth.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2004-04-03 06:08 PM


Dave,
Enjoyed the metaphor.

DavePage
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7 posted 2004-04-04 05:28 PM


Guys

The Man in Black has a song

If I had known you longer

You might be a little stronger

and maybe you'd shoot straighter than you do

Dave


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