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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-04-03 07:27 AM



Intimate Passions Realised

The candles are burning
I have dressed in red lace
Soon you shall be here
Can't wait to see your face

Hoping all goes to plan
I've longed for this so much
As I await in anticipation  
Knowing soon we will touch

My heart begins to race  
The butterflies inside dance
Will it be like we imagine
A night of sensual romance

As the clock counts down
There is a few minutes more
My heart skipped a beat
I hear the knock on the door

Greeting welcoming smiles
Hugs in a warming embrace
Its what we had waited for
Love whispered face to face

Sensuous lips flowed softly
Bodies caress in candlelight
Intimate passions realised
Into endless waves of delight

HopeĀ©2004

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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1 posted 2004-04-03 07:33 AM


WHEW!

Ya wanna get married girl?
WHAT! you're already married?
And I was going to take you on an expensive cruise..........

I think this is as sweet and romantic as it gets. I hope every word of it's true.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-04-03 12:16 PM


Eric what a wonderful reply ,  you had me smiling happily ....because I am  married to a man that is married to the T.V
this was Hope mind having another episode in passionate romantic mode

Thanks for your fun response Hope

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-04-03 02:01 PM


Hope

You are magic

Dave

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-03 02:13 PM


Your poetry always has such beautiful rhyme and rhythm.
Margherita
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5 posted 2004-04-03 07:22 PM


Wow, dear Hope, this is so passionate that my heart also began to race .... haha.
Wonderfully done!
Love and hugs. Margherita

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-04-03 11:43 PM


Thank you Dave for your kind reply , all I hope is that the muse continues waving that wand

Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2004-04-03 11:48 PM


Thank you Grover , so pleased you enjoy my writing .....I always rhyme ..
they just seem to come out that way

Hope

HopeS
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8 posted 2004-04-03 11:50 PM


Thanks Margherita , so pleased you felt the excitement ...heart racing ,  yes it can be a wonderful feeling
Hope

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2004-06-10 05:17 AM


Like the romantic thoughts here...get rid of that TV...James
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