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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-03 02:07 AM


my fingers are moving so fast i can't feel them anymore
the numbness sets in..
not just my fingers..
you look at me like you want me when no ones looking.
i look at you like i need you when everyones looking.
my only accessory is my heart on my sleave..

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2004-04-03 03:14 AM


you look at me like you want me when no ones looking.
i look at you like i need you when everyones looking.

hate to single anything out but l#ved those lines. Another fellow canuck, excellent

Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

2 posted 2004-04-03 04:20 AM


There is passionate urgency in this write....intense....fine writing...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
3 posted 2004-04-03 04:57 AM


"My only accessory is my heart on my sleeve"
^*Beautifully finalised with this last line*^

This was a very strong and powerful poem,
I fear too full of emotion to be ficticious.
Hope this person treats you as you deserve


^*Smile...it confuses people*^

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-03 05:04 AM


awesome!
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