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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-04-02 11:27 PM



Release of the heavens

lost in the rhythms
you wrap around me,
filling deep within this
infinite well that longs
to nurture your own hunger,

extending their reach,
the trees ache to hold
the rain, then release again,

i wake to your passion

then surrender beneath
the flow of tears
the storm brings tonight,

lay down with me lover,

naked, in the thirsty grass
that wets the desires
of two wandering hearts,

shed your skin onto mine

feel my touch
as your walls disintegrate,

let me heal you, my child,

we are raindrops, pathless,
finding our destinies locked
within the ocean's embrace

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-03-2004 12:06 PM).]

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-04-03 12:34 PM


then surrender beneath
the flow of tears
the storm brings tonight,

~sigh~ let it rain!

Aenimal
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2 posted 2004-04-03 03:17 AM


pisces+water=fun

ok i'm tired, time to slip into a mini-coma

Grover
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3 posted 2004-04-03 02:16 PM


Sensual.
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-04-03 07:06 PM


extending their reach,
the trees ache to hold
the rain, then release again,


Beautiful "wandering raindrops", dear Michele!
Great write.
Love and hugs. Margherita

gemjop
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5 posted 2004-04-03 07:21 PM


we are raindrops, pathless,

M, you're always passionate with the beauty you present. gah, sensuality on a stick!
xx


inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-04-03 08:17 PM


thanks for much
aujussy wolf
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7 posted 2004-04-04 03:14 AM


beautiful write , captured the feeling with ease ...nice and smooth babe
supple
-wild lil wolfy

.......
JDW III

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-04-04 03:37 AM


gawd! this is so awesome!
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2004-04-04 03:09 PM


thanks for stopping in, come on back soon, yawl
bklynboy
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10 posted 2004-04-04 05:27 PM


Very nice.....y'all
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2004-04-04 06:41 PM


InkyOne~

'we are raindrops, pathless'

Oh my ... wish that line was mine~
WONDERFUL !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

ice
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12 posted 2004-04-04 06:56 PM


"shed your skin onto mine"
Excellent line for this poem, the pivatal one in my opinion that says far more than the five words of it...
Romantic and moving write...
enjoyed
_______ice
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inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2004-04-04 09:06 PM


thanks again for looking in
bslicker
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14 posted 2004-04-04 10:11 PM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

vandana
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15 posted 2004-04-11 08:36 PM


nice write
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