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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2004-04-02 08:39 PM

There was a time
when I etched upon the face
of your crystal outer shell,
a signature of torment
hoping to get through
scraping, scraping
pains landscaping.

Then one day
the crack appeared
there formed, a tear,
drop of emotion
in slow motion
sliding down smooth surface
at last I'd made it in.

WhiteRose 04/02/04

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-04-02 08:50 PM

just a crack, wow what we cling to to feel we made an impact

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-04-02 10:24 PM

Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-02 10:49 PM

I suppose if we keep banging at the shut door it will eventually open.. eh? either that or we knock it down

Enjoyed Ms Rose.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-03 05:05 AM

triumph!

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

5 posted 2004-04-03 05:22 AM

"drop of emotion
in slow motion"

^*What a beautiful poem*^
We all have a crystal shell
behind which we masquerade.
Too afraid to let anyone in.

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2004-04-03 06:43 AM

Very nice poem..so much said with so small amount of words..

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2004-04-03 07:38 AM

Persistence works even in poetry....Very enjoyable!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-04-04 03:35 PM

Hi WhiteRose....Good to read you here again.
Loved your poem, especially the ending.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

9 posted 2004-04-04 03:55 PM

Really enjoyed!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2004-04-04 04:30 PM

a signature of torment
hoping to get through ~~

Hi Anne, nice to see your pretty face appearing here.
I had this feeling once...a need to get through to someone, to make them see~~
it took a very long time.

hugs
M

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

11 posted 2004-04-09 12:09 PM

beautiful

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