navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » rip my heart out baby..
Open Poetry #31
Post A Reply Post New Topic rip my heart out baby.. Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-02 07:36 PM


rip my heart out baby..
i still think about you
your eyes
your mouth
your smirk
i'll give you every little peice of me
if you'll just give me a minute of your time
i won't hurt you
i promise
please don't give up on something
because your afraid

i'm afraid too

rip my heart out baby..i love you

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-04-02 08:49 PM


oh yes
the pain of love
feels so good

aujussy wolf
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215
Michigan
2 posted 2004-04-02 08:53 PM


YESSSSSS  this is what i like to read
some raw passion
good write

.......
JDW III

Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-06 07:09 PM


It's perplexing how love can be so cruel.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #31 » rip my heart out baby..

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary