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Shelter It With Lies....For Passing

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ethome
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SECRET TIMES      song 1061          


you sell me short with empty lies,
you think you're playin me,
you fake your best in private times,
pretending you're so meek.

from a distance you disgrace,
the love I still have,
but everytime that we embrace,
I feel that I've been had

how did it happen where did you go,
I know the thrill is gone,
I felt you drop me from your soul
The love you had moved on
And if it's true there's someone new,
I know that you resigned
to hurt the one that still loves you,
and shelter it with lies

I don't like games I won't brush,
your skin like you adore,
I love you still but when we touch,
I can't feel you anymore.

out of the heartbank lost and found,
I'll find a heart like mine,
to fill the void you opened up,
you'll hear my last good-bye

how did it happen, where did you go,
I know the thrill is gone,
I felt you drop me from your soul,
The love you had moved on
And if it's true there's someone new,
I know that you resigned,
to hurt the one that loved you so,
and shelter it with lies.

(outro)
But when I'm gone your mind will whirl
You'll remember our good times
And your new girl won't fill your world
with a love as true as mine.....fade.....

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

© Copyright 2004 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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Much talent, great song!
muted
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2 posted 04-02-2004 10:14 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

for passing? passing shadows/Dixie?
if so, i think she will love it!

youve expressed this so well..
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 04-02-2004 11:39 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

hmmmm

i smell the wood burning........hmm
very interesting, as passing herself has said
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 04-03-2004 12:49 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Dear Eric,
Your words moved me in so many ways,  
truly a beautiful song for our Shadowy one.


*Bravo Sir*
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i enjoyed reading this. i am sorry but your picture reminds me of someone from along time ago. eyes that i cant forget. not a good memory i am afraid to say. but one i have forgiven. you write nice. i read your web page. enjoyed it too. some made me cry.          

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Fine writing...i enjoyed reading...

Thanks..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ethome
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Thanks to everyone for dropping in to read this piece. I have been reading some of Divie's love lament poems lately so thought I'd write this little song to let her know I sympathize.
Regards

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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Eric, dear Eric...you have touched my heart and soul

you are a darling man

I can hear that music in my mind, and I can see that you really do understand. That's all I ever want for.

I'm keeping this in my library, not for the reason of having it to remember you by...(I will never forget this beauty)...but just for the sake of holding a friend close always.
ethome
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Thanks back to ya Dixie and I wish you the best in the future.

Eric
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ethome
Always enjoy your lyrics. Good one
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Eric,  very well said and sung.  So appropriate.   Well done!
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had to read again
 
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