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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-04-02 05:33 PM


Unwittingly Prey


Composed and structured since chaos
carelessness at the formative years
at a pleading the call for movement is made.

Whirling forward content within whim
counting no time and courting the wind.
Wisdom as the owl silently seeking its prey

soundless as it wrenches the air
unsure of the salver to take part, or even if it will be there.

None the less that call is made and reckoned on high
as the plan from nowhere assuredly lay
at the feet of the poor, unwittingly prey.

© Copyright 2004 JL - All Rights Reserved
Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-02 06:27 PM


Pray for your prey. Very nice, enjoyed!
zippi
Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56
California
2 posted 2004-04-02 06:42 PM


Babe this was like walking there with you. So powerful, you've done it once again, you've stolen my heart.
Rene`

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-04-05 11:24 AM


soundless as it wrenches the air

yes, soundless...through your words, I can't help but think of what in the world is happening today?  

another outstanding write

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