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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-02 04:52 PM



Today I found my strength
in the greyness of the day,
knowing that what follows
will be darkness and peace,
until the sun shines tomorrow
and with it, a rainbow of thoughts.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JL
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1 posted 2004-04-02 05:02 PM


Reminds me of a cold and rainy day, all alone with those colorful thoughts of the soon to see rainbow.  Very nice read.
JL


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-04-02 05:04 PM


Yes it is cold and rainy here today...much colder than it should be for this time of year...with a possibility again of snow come Sunday.

Thank you, JL
M

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state of mind
3 posted 2004-04-02 06:14 PM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

gemjop
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4 posted 2004-04-02 06:20 PM


Maureen, knowing that better things are always up ahead somewhere is a comforting thing. Finding peace in darkness can indeed be as beautiful as that found in rainbows. I'm keeping this.
Grover
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5 posted 2004-04-02 06:21 PM


Warm and beautiful write.
ethome
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6 posted 2004-04-02 06:23 PM


Maureen

I like that...A rainbow of thoughts...

Very nice....

Eric

ChemicalRepose
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7 posted 2004-04-02 06:50 PM


Such beautiful words, perfectly assembled, and very enjoyable.
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-04-03 05:06 AM


you and I both
Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!
9 posted 2004-04-03 05:18 AM


^*-*^*-*^*-*^*-*^
Yes...
and before long
the Sun will shine
for us all

^*The long awaited spring*^
^*will soon be with us*^

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2004-04-03 06:37 AM


Very nice..rainbows are walways so cheerful..a small miracle of the elements...thank you M....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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