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Open Poetry #31

(As I open the door...)

alan6501
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since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
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0 posted 2004-04-02 04:35 PM

As I open the door
I feel that there's more
Than these four walls...
I'm always yearning
Never just accepting
What I have is what I have
The grass always seem greener
On that other side
I cannot seem to hide
From this itching
That gets under my skin
I've let it win
I'm a slave to the world
Screaming while locked in chains
Internally I bleed
While I prick my finger
To make sure I'm still alive...

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-04-02 04:57 PM

so very true and a very good write, Alan...
I feel this way, often.

M

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-02 06:54 PM

Yes, very nice!

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