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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2004-04-02 12:08 PM




Twisted imageries carried on a stick.
Caustic wind,
the sight begins.
Bellowed,
from one’s inner son.
The Earth trembled
and scorched the Sun.
Sounds to flavors
this taste for blood.
Hoofs from animals, the same for some.
Grief for passion
from hatreds turn.
The streets ate smoke,
so the sky
wouldn’t burn.
Tears in an envelope
is all I saw.
Cost for reality,
another
for the war.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-02 01:30 PM


A brilliant write, much enjoyed!
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

2 posted 2004-04-02 03:09 PM


(tears in an envelope,) brilliant. Well enjoyed, Maggie
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-04-02 03:16 PM


yes...well done

quite a powerful message

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

4 posted 2004-04-02 04:52 PM


Grover, thank you for reading and the well appreciated reponse.

Maggie, thanks as usual, see on the darkside.

passing shawdows, good to hear from you again, Thank you.

all,

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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