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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

0 posted 2004-04-02 10:38 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+
I have a jar of magic cream,
It's made from sour limes,
I dab it on my face at night,
To pucker up the lines!

My perfume's made from flowers,
I spray it head to toes,
I douse myself, both day and night,
To keep me smellin' like a rose!
+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-04-02 10:41 AM


Nice poem
Enjoyed the read

Gloom

Kicking Kim
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2 posted 2004-04-02 10:48 AM


This was a lovely poem
with such a pretty content.
I enjoyed the soft tone
and the poems gentle meaning!

Nice job!

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

vandana
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3 posted 2004-04-02 10:53 AM


enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-04-02 11:24 AM


Earth Angel
So if I smell a rose, you are around. LOL

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-02 11:29 AM


cute...I gotta try some of that lime stuff
Nightshade
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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-04-02 11:44 AM



ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2004-04-02 11:47 AM


You have a great sense of humor, and a sweet combination of charms.
TD

Enchantress
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8 posted 2004-04-02 11:49 AM


Cute write Linda.
Hugs~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

mysticpoe
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9 posted 2004-04-02 11:54 AM


Missed you optimism Earth Angel.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
10 posted 2004-04-02 01:33 PM


Witty... a clever write. Thanks!
JL
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Texas, USA
11 posted 2004-04-02 04:42 PM


Very nice.  Put it with a catchy tune, it could probably sell a lot of product!  Great write!
JL


gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
12 posted 2004-04-02 06:12 PM


Hey you! I'm smiling at you again like i always did you playful little thing.

Missed you my friend, and it was lovely to know you had thought of me the day before i came back. psychic abilities perhaps? love ya. xx

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