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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-04-01 11:48 PM


you wore your blue shirt today
the one i said i loved.

...smile..
i know you want to,
i know your dying to get out


i know you so well
..well..
i want to
i'm so selfish,your so amazing
whisper to me..
tell me you need me like i need you
..and god..i need you



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-04-01 11:55 PM


Did that get his attention?
An open plea that can't be mistaken for anything other than what it is.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-02 02:01 AM


easy to fall back into that place
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-04-02 03:41 PM


You don't mince any words... lol
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-04-02 04:39 PM


Very much said in a short poem, and very warm and loving.
JL


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