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What Comes Around Goes Around
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What Comes Around Goes Around |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's easy writin' poetry, I do it all the time, It's usually quite silly, And I'm lucky if it rhymes. Most of my crap is senseless, My conversations too, Some say that I'm incorrigible, (In fact there's quite a few). I usually don't have much to say, In fact that's almost every day, But criticism doesn't get me down, I'm as good at saying nuthin', as anyone around. My teachers they all loved me, I had to be their favorite, They were always coming over, And talking with my parents! They were at my house, More than I at school, Notes to home for autographs, (They must have thought me cool). Now I are more smarter, With children of my own, My daughter is an angel, My son's another TOE!! (Oh Woe) Now ya know me better, And it's the Lord's revenge What comes around-goes around, And I'm payin' for my sins!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If you get as good as you give, then you should be okay, Toe Man! Just think, from the fruit of your looms, I mean loins, came an angel and a toe! lol That ain't half bad!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are just TOO much! but we love ya!  Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
What goes around comes around or something like that. Just think if your youngsters are like their pappy they have a great sense of humor and a lot of love stired within their hearts. Hugs Bon-Bon  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you left all the others out of this one... and spoke about what was closest to your heart. Good Job, you old Toe... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 you are a good guy, they are lucky to have you for a daddy...just as lucky as you are for having them |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It sure does...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You are sooo funny, Toe. It's so nice to read something that makes me laugh out loud! Thanks for sharing!  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, you are to funny. I love reading your s t u f f. sg |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I've often said, your kids just come along to pay ya back for what ya did to your own parents.........Loved this little ditty, I are smart enough to understand it. Eric |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Sometimes, if we're lucky poetry does come easy. There are moments when it just seems to pure out of me but then there are those times when, try as I may, nothing happens. Those are scary moments indeed. This was light and easy, funny too, I enjoyed much Rene` |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Most of my crap is senseless, My conversations too, Some say that I'm incorrigible, (In fact there's quite a few). Awww...you're bad....but you're not that bad. hugs, Chris |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
See this one, LongJohn? Toe's at it again...poor little guy playing the humble, homey, straw-in--mouth, gollygee boy again. Good grief! How can he expect anyone to buy this??? What a dastardly fellow!! Another Toe? Ah, jeez!!!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't care what they say about you you know I love ya |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, it's like they say, here a toe there a toe Good morning, such a good message with humor, yet conviction....and so so true! |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I really enjoyed the gentle humour of this poem. You are a wonderful writer! I enjoyed it very much!  ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Enjoyed this, a very nice nonchalant display with rhyme. If nothing is something |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Is your son sticking you with the check again... on your own birthday? LOL... and you're loving every minute of it. *S* I know how much you love them both, incorrigible one. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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