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You and Me
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You and Me |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You and Me Hints of aroma of the sea, the melody, the love in you, and me. Is it you, or only a stormy night, or faint puffed clouds in flight? Or a scenery for the season of storms, alone without approved form? Or is it boundless dreams, the silence beneath the sea’s silent crystal blue? Possibilities of this love being true, this silent dream, dreams of you. Bouncing between the sky, and the ocean’s floor, feelings, revered. Rumors unmentioned, but said, screamed, but silent, aware of a rapport. Temptations to block, fold, and placed to a height, yet kept so near. Within a touch, a quick inhale, consciousness for a moment in truth. Truth quickly disappears, departed moonlight, myth, but assured, it is you, Only for a moment, that faint scent again, of your mind’s sea and shore. Inviting on the dunes are the shore’s song and verse, rhythmic within the sea. Played on the instruments of wind and tide, and enchanting breeze. Love, shared, with the moons midnight dare, skipped across the water’s edge. Dares to explore, daring to hope, drawn to you by my own petitioning heart. To love, to need, to be alone… just you and me, a beach, and the open sea. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Truly, a gem... very nice indeed!  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh you are a romantic this is a beauty, you sound so much in love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A Texas romantic....great writing, JL! I welcome you and give thanks to Lee for steering you our way. Best wishes... Michael |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite....beautiful write!! Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To love, to need, to be alone… just you and me, a beach, and the open sea. Well, my friend, this entire write drew me in and lavished me with wonderful music... To love, to need, to be alone...to be alone, also popped out and spoke to me...as I do so need to be by myself...that unique special quality time with no noise...to read, to write, to just sit and ponder thoughts, or simply listen to the music of our Lord. Yes, JL, reading this touched all epitones of life for me...and is filled with a finality of sorts...with peace and hope, allowance...allowing things to come new each and every day...oh I do so need to love and be loved, and I am...and have been, my entire life. Thank you for bringing into view what we sometimes forget...the beauty of all your words brings always hope for a better world. Love to you and yours always. me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read this...enjoyed the perspective |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Oh what beauty! So romantic, absolutely drew me in. Every line was magical. Rene` |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"just you and me, a beach, and the open sea." ~ Amen! I enjoyed your oceanic recipe for blissful loving!  Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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