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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28
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0 posted 2004-04-01 04:26 PM


How can this be reality at all?
When all I see is an image of me when I fall
Broken into a thousand speckles
Glimmering in your spectacles
Shivering in your arms
And breaking down your fictitious alarms
Creating a jar full of lies
I am broken by your demise
Shock victimized
A casualty within your eyes
Counting all of my tears
Liquefied by your fears
Grasping onto your imagination
Dining at your resurrection
Educating your final correction

Blooming to your goddess
I see your promise
Blooming towards your goddess
I acknowledge your defiance

I can't comprehend your dark relentlessness
I can show you your recklessness
Finally believing my joyfulness
Concluding your acquaintance
I will detonate your ignorance
Promising your forgiveness

As she looks upon her goddess
I forget her promise
Flying to her goddess
I remember her defiance

© Copyright 2004 Ben - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-01 05:23 PM


Intense, enjoyed!
majnu
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since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088
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2 posted 2004-04-06 03:27 AM


the sentiments seem to be of a bygone era. thanks for the time trip.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
3 posted 2004-04-06 07:35 AM


Well written
..very powerful post..
I enjoyed!



^*~Kimberley~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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