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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-04-02 08:42 AM


Circulate broadening evolutions
Breath in the collaborator
Thought provoking dimensions
Cunning drinkers of sensual nature
We are poets; we are one, twins of
Some very successful predestined poise
Silhouette of emotions, mentoring seamen

Shhhhh...listen...a rare heartbeat of passion
Taps our core, intrudes, taking us up up up
and we surrender to this music
Unto recognition of distinction
Spilling over, waves of lavished Zen
Scarcely known by any word which lends

Of such a voice as humanity
China-white poetic excellence
Tracing a labyrinth inevitable..
Balance gaining meteoric skies
Filtering all…towards directive ness
Growing up within azure sea infinite
Mirrored moments ride, artistically entwined
We are larger, faster, louder now
Drenched with eyes
Of shining oils dancing smiles of annotations

Sacred moves by mingling earthen rose
Roar of union, sung by Gods
Depicting Heaven’s long white gown
There in a gargantuan ballroom of swans
We share a potion of green invitations
A meadow of life blood…whispering blends
Secrets noticed in evening skies
How utterly genius, quit mysterious
How bedazzled…such this path, walk I

I cannot move tomorrow, nor shall we
In tenderness turn away, we are....
dancing like children, toward an authentic metaphor
We are that air of July
Muse of which decodes all meanings
Building up the soul in harmony
Metaphysical fluids, creating a hemisphere

Another look, then another, we…beyond coming back

The earth moves defining ornamentation
Enshrouding our souls
Like...human sense lamenting lullabies
Following large sleeves of sound entwined

Resonance so pure...spreading commodities
Of humanness, spring, your arms of faith
Simplicity is asserted into urgency
Ensuring shapes, you are an aesthetic company
Like a grand baroque of artful threads
Mighty insignia, daylight dreams
Noontime tides
Night time moon...

Echoes signify spiritual expressions
from where we were, we know
Somehow you know...becoming
Powerless, nor resist
Therein
A richer inner life expressed
thoughts exploding a prowess
Theologian fires rage wild!

Extensively…
Nothing concerns...we absolutely suffer
This intoxicating flicker
This positive science of an artistic measure
Wandering the garden of eternal bliss
Eternal life...creation...


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-02 08:47 AM


I went to pick out certain lines ...well, I'll just say this is a fine piece to read on an early morning for me...the birds and sun woke me and I couldn't get back to sleep...

enjoyed this very much

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-04-02 08:55 AM


"creation..." ~ Yeppers! I do believe that you just summed it all up for us! lol

Yours is a mind that must never sleep!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-04-02 08:58 AM


LeeJ
A wonderland of senses phrases enjoyed and a good friday to you.

zippi
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since 2004-03-31
Posts 56
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4 posted 2004-04-02 08:58 AM


Superb, outstanding,  Lee J you have a heart of purest gold and it comes brilliantly out in your script.
Thanks sis
Rene`

Crimson Moon
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5 posted 2004-04-02 10:51 AM


A magical journey through the soul of a writer. Simply beautiful.
vandana
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6 posted 2004-04-02 10:53 AM


enjoyed
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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7 posted 2004-04-02 02:56 PM


You are a conductor of the fine music of words!
JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
8 posted 2004-04-02 04:16 PM


Lee J:
A marvelous depiction of that realm “With In The Mind of Literature.”  You have painted this landscape from within your mind, and it is beautiful.  Great write!
JL

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