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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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 ` ` ` ` inspired by a friend who sweetly told me the story of her jumping off the roof as a child because she thought she could fly....thank you for tickling my muse. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, I love this!!! What perfect perfect poise. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
muted This gave me shivers of appreciation...and took me back to a time long ago. Thank you! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Splendid!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dawn, you are a very creative and amazing writer. This is exquisite! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This will bring back memories...even with old guys like me... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what innocence and profound beauty! I loved this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What child hasn't wondered? I know I did... and I revel in those evenings when in my dreams, the treetops tickle my toes... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 KEEPER! KEEPER! KEEPER! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! This is an excellent write. So expressive and vivid! A beauty. JL |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
And I too though (once) that I could soar against gravity. Jumped from a hay-loft, down I went along with my confidence. This was a true pleasure. Rene` |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Our bodies may not be able to take flight, but our spirits certainly can! I was deeply touched by this earthbound angel's childhood story!  To life, Light, and angel flight! EA |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
can't wait to read about some of "your" (all of you) childhood zany attempts, thanks you guys  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dawn~ such a little tickle this gave, I needed the laugh and smile of delight, thank you ~~**~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How very lovely! Yes the dream of flying is always present ... not only in children. Much enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a wonderful write Dawn. Enjoyed thoroughly. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Brings back memories of times past and of times flying in a small plane, not as graceful as paper wings. Beautifully written i thank you for sharing it. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, You brought the moment delicately to life. I so admire your skill and enjoy what you write. Great penning, great message.Another keeper! Sadie |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
muted, I've been missing reading you since I've been so busy lately, but wanted to take time to at least read one. And what a "one!" I love reading your work!  ....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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