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More---a response to Serenity's "the more"
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More---a response to Serenity's "the more" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
And til there is no more...no more Yet still you ask, beg, demand that I be more, do more, give more until what I once was is just a mere shadow of what I have become and only a pretence of what I yet must become. And still you want more |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand this well...so well |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you...  you give voice to the weary, and all together too well too.  I'm happy though, you found some inspiration, and yep, I'm tired too. (and yes, I still see him occasionally and he's sexy as ever...  ) |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good write!  |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
Boy do I understand where you're coming from. I have many memories of such a time. "Day and night, one in the same, Darkness is my Destiny." |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sometimes it will never be enough. Well done. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew....Paula I always knew you were deep and this just proves it to me......Excellent! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"And still you want more" Very powerful ending. I read Serenity's poem and this is a wonderful reasponse!! Very well written!  ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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