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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-04-01 11:10 AM




Poets are This

Yellow flames, blue streams
Esteem found among our dreams
Together as one



Extremes to endure
Cannot live without either
Condensation kissed

Here is your dream then
In the cool heat of your mind
Live your moments well


Dedicated to All of Passions' Poets
Write, and do so
As if your life depends on it

Photography: K R Jungel


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-04-01 11:14 AM


Yes!! Yes!! Yes!!  Beautiful!!
Words escape me at the moment.
I love this!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-04-01 11:20 AM


Thank you for this...Bravo!
TD

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3 posted 2004-04-01 11:55 AM



write on!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-04-01 12:01 PM


Sunshine
Well done.

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2004-04-01 12:13 PM


White hot flames burning
Emotional words yearning
To be read by few

Scattered not yet missed
The ones that read get souls kissed,
When the words from you.

Gloom

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-04-01 12:17 PM


Sunshine, you have brought goose bumps to my arms, by the shear beauty of this...God bless you for such lovely thoughts.
jellybeans
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7 posted 2004-04-01 01:40 PM


oh my ........exquisite.......and so true....we need to write...we need each other.....tis a gift, these pages of blue...sigh....thank you for this
Grover
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8 posted 2004-04-01 01:55 PM


Very good... actually, great!
JL
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9 posted 2004-04-01 03:19 PM


A subject so hard to approach, but you made it so easy to understand in so few words.  Excellent write!
JL


zippi
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10 posted 2004-04-01 03:36 PM


Stunning!
Bravo!
You have the gift.
Rene`

Toerag
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11 posted 2004-04-01 03:42 PM


You mean to write like nobody's watching?.......luvya...Flaming Toerag
Dark Angel
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12 posted 2004-04-01 03:53 PM


WRITE ON!

Right on! babe.

&

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

ethome
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13 posted 2004-04-01 04:01 PM


Very nice! I love the cool heat of your mind line!

You're a wonderful, special poet. Thanks for the encouragement over the years.....

Eric

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2004-04-01 04:02 PM


Was that picture a self-portrait of your yellow flames and blue streaks, Dear Poetessa! Your words match your own beautiful and poetic soul that shines ever so brightly on these pages of heavenly blue!

Love & the Eternal Flame,
Linda

Sunshine
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15 posted 2004-04-02 12:01 PM


I truly enjoyed reposting this little favorite of mine...from a trip made to New Orleans, December, 1999...I can't tell you who was more surprised that this photo turned out as well as it did...

and I can't think of any other expression of how I perceive all of the poets here...

thank you so much for letting me share with you.

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