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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-04-01 06:55 AM


damn-damn-damn


the fluid air
blasts
the hairs
of my become
as if there were
a serpent there
fork-tongued
licking
where
(want more?)


aching


in the chill
of air
on my own
I beg again
damn-damn-damn-me
damned-I-am...


"become"


I am,


the only one...


rising


raise-a-rattle


fist


damn-damn-damn
me
damn...



like this...


meet me in the centered death


tallying the beads.


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-01 06:58 AM



Welcome to Passions, Woman-stands-with-fist!  The last time I saw you was with the very good looking young soldier...

I hear you, m'friend, I hear you...

ethome
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2 posted 2004-04-01 07:06 AM


Just where is the centered death anyway?
Sounds scary.
I always love the creativity of your stuff!

Eric

Nan
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3 posted 2004-04-01 07:09 AM


AH - someone speaking with forked tongue??... Seems to be riling our serene one...
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-04-01 07:42 AM


serenity,
What need to tally beads, when there are needs.

dingusjr
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5 posted 2004-04-01 08:39 AM


Well, the first part really got my attention!
gemjop
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6 posted 2004-04-08 07:50 AM


woah.

this one just has that something.

am i making sense? How did I find something seductive within this? Loved it anyway K.

xxx

Professor Gloom
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7 posted 2004-04-08 07:54 AM


I have a snakebite kit tucked in my headboard,
A nice pint of Canadian Mist.
It’s been there for years, same bottle,
Only a couple of inches missing
Seldom any snakes there, but you have to be prepared.
Powerful write

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-04-08 08:17 AM


serenity,
There is always a need to tally beads.

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9 posted 2004-04-08 10:31 AM


Hello K,
One of my Mother-in-laws used to say that when
she dreamed of snakes it was symbolic of having
an enemy...the snake was her enemy. Guess so, if it bit, Huh?? LOL
Hugs, sweet SereneOne
Ethel

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2004-04-08 12:53 PM


Heh...

Um... Thanks for reading.

Prof? I'm lmao of here. You psychic thang.
You'd better check that snake-bite kit of yours, because? Well, that happens to be my anti-venom of choice as well, and I do believe that writing this took more than a pint. (shaking my head here--have we discussed this before? I call my whiskey my "snake-bite kit" too...)

*hic* heh heh.

This one was of dem whiskey thangs, folks.

damnedsnakes



Thanks for putting up with me.

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11 posted 2004-04-09 01:35 AM


snake bite kit ...those are a good thing to have when dealing with snakes my lady ... you should be picked up off your feet by some able young man(or old ) and carry you to safety
right?

.......
JDW III

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12 posted 2004-04-09 02:39 AM


Was this before, during or after the bath   Sissssssss?
serenity blaze
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13 posted 2004-04-09 04:23 AM


Check the date of the post, "sis".



I've had several baths since then.

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