Love, Depression, Loneliness

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Open Poetry #31

Love, Depression, Loneliness

DuckieGurL
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 15

0 posted 2004-04-01 05:19 AM

Love
Enormous sky has
a space for my love to rest.
Constantly searching
for true love to shine upon,
lighting up the dark with love.
Depression
The descending stars,
they glow through the melting walls.
They whispered,
"Who will be the first to
begin their fall? Or we all?"
Loneliness
Along the path where
the stream is talking aloud.
I breathe the mist and
continue walking, try to
listen to the hollow sound
of the crowd.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-01 03:45 PM

Such a melancholy write aches.
Well done...good imagery.
Hugs~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Darker Season
Junior Member

since 2004-04-01

Posts 48
Wisconsin

2 posted 2004-04-01 03:50 PM

I thought this was a really nice poem. I especially liked the imagery used throughout this piece of work. Good job!!!

zippi
Member

since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

3 posted 2004-04-01 03:53 PM

Three very strong emotions, explored and described so vividly.
Rene`

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-01 05:45 PM

I really enjoyed this!

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