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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-04-01 02:13 AM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

As you all know by now I am a hopeless romantic
and this was purely the result of my fertile
imagination but this time I wrote from a
male's perspective.I hope you like the result.

* * *

Through clouds of grey the sun shines through
As I awaken from my dreams of you
To my delight you are standing there
With thy ruby lips and silken hair

Unspoken pleasures are seen in thine eyes
They speak of love, so full of surprise
Come quench my thirst for passion and desire
For only your love can contain this fire

To satisfy my untamed lust
To kiss your tender lips I must
Sweet sensations arise from deep within
To not love you would be a mortal sin

Temptations of love are ours to behold
Your love is worth more than the finest gold
Within your heart lies a living treasure
My love for you is beyond measure

Come lay with me down in the field
Love's harvest is now ours to yield
Let me take you far beyond the sky
Upon wings of love we will fly

* * *

"You have intensified all colors,
heightened all beauty,
deepened all delight.
I love you more than life,
my beauty, my wonder"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-01 02:20 AM


any way you write of love is spectacular!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2004-04-01 03:09 AM


Wow, riding the waves of passion. Very beautiful, even from the male perspective you hit the target!
Love, Margherita

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2004-04-01 04:05 AM


I agree with Dixie... however you write it is always exceptional....and your pictures are so good too....well done Sue..

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2004-04-01 06:55 AM


Sue

A beautiful romantic write wonderfully conceived and presented.

Eric

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-04-06 05:38 PM


Sue~
Soooooooooooo pretty is this~
Let's kick it back to the top of the heap for another go-round~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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